REFLECTION OF THE STORY: THE WORLD IS AN APPLE


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           I love the story of the world is an apple. The story is about Mario, the husband of Gloria losses his job because he stole a single apple and their daughter had a fever and they needed money for the medicine of Tita. The only solution that Mario can think of is returning back to his bad deeds with his friend named Pablo. I thought that it could have a happy ending because the story was simple yet it was so amazing and I love to flow of the story. The story was written well and the happenings was so dramatic and I was so surprised that they would fire Mario because of taking a single apple which ma the story really sad. The characters were also so realistic and the places of where the story where also realistic that I can imagine the scenes to be real. I was so angry with Mario because he lied to his wife Gloria about instead of telling her the truth, but later on he told Gloria the truth behind his missing money.  It really made me happy that he finally told Gloria the truth and decided to find another plan to fix their problem. It’s so nice of Mario having a plan of having another job but I wasn’t so happy with his plan because it was returning to his bad deeds and he is going back with his old friend Pablo. I wish Mario could have changed his mind before it was all too late. I like the character who is Gloria because even if her family needed the money that Mario could have gotten but because it’s dishonest money, she still did not accept Pablo’s offer of a dishonest job even if they really need it she still did not accept his offer to Mario. Still I was so happy because I get to read the story the world is an apple but I would love it more if it had a happy ending. If I had been given a chance to rewrite the story and write a happy ending, I would go like this:

     ……. When Mario was about to leave and go with Mario, he saw a picture with Tita inside a cradle and written in the back of the picture that he is going to do everything for Tita and he will never do anything to make Tita cry. So, he went back down stairs and saw Tita crying and it changed his mind and did not go with Pablo. The next morning there was a person knocking on their door and he was offering a job in their apple farm. Without any regret they accepted the job offer and they lived happily with their new job and their new life. THE END.             
 

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